Planning Storyboard for my snickers commercial

First scene:

In the first scene, we'll be at the park in an open field to have room to film and play. Well then prepare ourselves to play the game football with each other. Here we'll quickly discuss our positions, rules and how far we need to go for it to be considered a touchdown.

Second scene:

In the next scene, we'll show a collage of clips. These clips will show me constantly beating down the other player. This will highlight how weak they are and how out of place they are right now in such a fierce game of American football.

Third scene:

This scene will show my frustration with how easy it is for me to win. I'll then go confront the other player and say things that will express how I feel about this. It can be the phrases such as "Bro, you suck right now" or " Why you so out of the game." This scene might be shot at a high angle and over the shoulder shot.

Fourth scene:

This scene will show me helping to lift the other person up onto their feet. I'll then hand them over a snickers bar while saying, "Here, have a snickers." Once they bit into the candy, you'll see then see me ask the question," Better?". The other player will reply with the positive statement of "Better." This will show how the snickers gives them the energy to be their true selves.

Fifth scene:

In this scene, you'll see a few clips of the other player finally beating me and standing up against me in the game. I'll be lying on the floor to show hard they hit me. It will show much much better the player got from eating a snickers.

Sixth scene:

The final scene will conclude the commercial by being a brown background. It will also include the snickers brand name and its iconic slogan of " Your not you when you're hungry." You'll also hear a voice-over saying the slogan.